Rated 1/5
It's a pity that such an interesting story has been written in such a poor way.Pilkington Garimara does not have the control over the writing that one expects from a published author, and the book suffers from constant amateurish shifts in perspective, unnecessary repetitions, and outright intrusions. It's almost as if it hasn't been fully proof-read and line-edited.Of course, if you do give the story to someone else to "fix up", you may get something like the dreadful film based on this book, "Rabbit-proof fence". In the added features interviews of that particular mess, the screenwriter admits that she felt the story was ripe for having all manner of things "overlayered" on it. The result is that the film grossly distorts the events in the actual story for obvious political purposes.This story is already politically manipulated by Doris Pilkington Garimara, with impressive biases built right into the narrative in an embarrassingly ham-fisted way. It's interesting to note that Pilkington Garimara was, at the time the film was released (half a decade after the book) Co-Patron of State and Federal Sorry Day Committees' Journey of Healing (?).What can one say after reading this? What would one say to the author? 'Well done, you've written a whole book, with words and capital letters and all! Good work!'As i said, it's a terrible pity that such an important story has been told with the skillset of a poorly organised year 9 student.Specifically, there's too much detail of what the girls had for breakfast. There's too much a sense that this is a story of "Are we there yet?". Pilkington Garimara is happy to interpret for us the evil deeds of the evil whites who do evil things, but there's no real interpretation of all the whites who help the girls out with remarkable generosity and who support their bid for freedom.There's no explanation of why the police didn't just drive down along the Fence and pick the girls up: it was well known where they were headed and how they were getting there. The film invents something to gloss over this, but why not do some research and really find out why the girls were allowed to elude recovery? That would have been a very interesting piece of character analysis: there are hints that some of those evil whites were actually on the side of the absconders.Overall, this is just so many wasted opportunities.